I'm not very familiar with the context here, so forgive me if I am wrong, but as well as being spiritual I saw the poem as being a very human portrayal of Paul. I don't regret rereading it several times. A belated congrats on the DD.
Brilliant piece, absolutely brilliant. You have a very distinct voice - more so than the Phillipians to Paul, you seem to address an audience greater than the work itself, and that is what makes this a truly beautiful tribute - and a natural, seamless progression. The beginning and end are parallels, each existing with the other and ceasing without/with each other.
My one suggestion as far as possible improvement would go - as this piece is as close to flawless as it gets - would be in the line regarding Paul addressing the "crowds." In following the theme of duality you seem to have interwoven throughout the piece, might i suggest he be addressing the "mass", "masses", or "congregation"? Obviously there is very little need for change in this piece as evidenced by its well earned merits, but i thought i'd at least leave you that thought.
Regardless, brilliant piece my friend. Drawing upon wisdoms and truths established by classical literature to provide the foundation for one's own message has always been an element i've appreciated greatly in any modern art medium. Love it.
Hi. I wanted to let you know that when I received this comment I decided to look at your profile and see what kind of person you are.
What I found is that we have at least a few things in common. Notably, I'm way into Pokemon myself, and I love animals. I actually had rats living in my apartment for two years when I was living with a girl who owned rats, and I miss them now. Their names were Gideon and Francis and they were some of the friendliest, happiest animals I have ever been around. I would consider getting rats myself, but I am moving to China to teach soon and wouldn't be able to take them with me.
Your dog is pretty cute too. I had a dog growing up and would like to get one as soon as I live in a place where I have enough time to give a big dog the care she deserves.
I have a cat. Her name is Calliopy and she is very pretty and happy. My parents are going to take of her while I am in China (they have two cats themselves) and for that I am very grateful.
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