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What I Found on Wooden Slabs by ~ashellessmind:iconashellessmind:



Graffiti. Most notably
"Class of '64" etched
into one forlorn  corner,
"September 10, '79 / Marc was here"
penciled on another, and one more
which just said "1988" -- generations
whispering amongst themselves
in lewd remarks scrawled thick
with purple permanent marker.

A remarkably correct sketch
of Fred Flintstone, winking, I think, at me,
or at something beyond.

A swastika, a swastika,
a large swastika, which was crossed out
and connected to an arrow pointing towards "CHRIST
WOULD NOT DRAW THIS!"
scribbled on the edge.

"You gotta have the Nads!"
with the Nads
underlined for effect.

"Raise HELL,
not WAR" but with "WEED"
printed in dark ink
over the former word.

Hundreds of equations, dripping
down into one confused
conclusion, like rain
collecting in a pool;
a wind-blown sailboat
wafting softly over
what "X" became.

Hearts encircling names
in private hotel rooms
where they can lie
together, and alone:
so many that I boggle
at their multiplicitous love
and wonder whether
any flicker of that passion
glimmers in our world, today.

The remnants of their aging hands,
these fishermen who cast their lines
across time, slipping their hooks
under my skin and reeling me in
against the faint tug
of my nonexistence.
:iconashellessmind:

Author's Comments

Well, I was not expecting a daily deviation, especially for this piece. Thanks to Fllnthblnk for finding it.

The piece was still quite rough when it got the DD, so I updated it. I do hope that doesn't ruin anything for anyone. I cut the slack, clarified a few things. hopefully it reads better now, and not worse.

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-07-29

We all know graffiti. What I Found on Wooden Slabs by ~ashellessmind is a poem that transcends the swastikas, Fred, the hearts and names written naughtily in permanent ink. (Featured by ^fllnthblnk)

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:iconrlkirkland:
Little slips of life.
Touched but for a moment, now touching me. :sun:

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People are Important - Goals much less
When we stop learning we have begun to die - Shamelessly Purloined
:iconyouinventedme:
quite a find

the slabs
and your poem
both

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:iconashellessmind:
Wow, thanks. I'm glad you liked it!

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Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
:iconrlkirkland:
:heart:

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People are Important - Goals much less
When we stop learning we have begun to die - Shamelessly Purloined
:iconashellessmind:
Just be glad I'm not Moses and these slabs are not the New Law.

Also, thanks :D

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Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
:iconbeaple:
Mathematicians.
Pirates.
Pornographers.
Ten year old
Romanians.
The Letter X.

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You're no scarlet prim proper rose
Sing me your pretty prose
Lips pressed nose to nose
Legs entwined with twenty toes.
:iconbeaple:
I was once in a house with a recreation of the tablets of Ten Commandments made to look like they were broken and then glued back together.

I think God choked on his cereal at that one.

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You're no scarlet prim proper rose
Sing me your pretty prose
Lips pressed nose to nose
Legs entwined with twenty toes.
:iconashellessmind:
you forgot Jesus.

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Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
:iconbeaple:
Forgot who?

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You're no scarlet prim proper rose
Sing me your pretty prose
Lips pressed nose to nose
Legs entwined with twenty toes.
:iconbekkia:
This is an interesting piece of found poetry. :aww:

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